Jim Goar
My Poems come in sets and the sets come from questions. Whole Milk wanted to know what poetry was w/o its most obvious tool, the line break. Whole Milk also contained everything I knew. That book dried me out. After Meng Chiao came about two years later. It wanted to explore what line breaks could do that punctuation could not. Both of these books could have been written anywhere. The location was in my head. Boulder, Brevard, Bangkok and Seoul played little part. In 33 Times Before Sunrise, I wanted to change that. I wanted location to be key. I also wanted to see why words with a left margin and uniform spacing would not work as a poem, but those same words, when spread over the page, worked well. I used old tools and new tools to write 33 Times. It dealt with space and the ground under my ass. It ended when I left Seoul.
After spending the summer in the States I am back in Seoul. I wonder if 33 Times is picking back up in this series, or if this series is something different. These poems seem to be dealing with the same formal questions, but the location of the writing and the circumstances surrounding the writing have changed. I no longer write on a computer or at a Buddhist monastery. Now I write on a bus or outside Sang-yeon’s office or on my bed. The only thing consistent with this set is the notebook.
North Korea conducted a nuclear test just before I returned to Seoul. The thought that a missile could be in the air right now, though irrational, is present. The Bomb is never far away from these poems.
Oct 27th
6:03p
Sean building
Seoul
*
Neighbor
A yellow coat
a keyhole
& I can leave Sunday morning
jellyroll let me
a green light walk
silently next door
Above the March
coat her belly
rainy day
taxi
and parents alike
danced and did not
sing to keep dry
High Noon
(oct 23rd)
Here we have
the world
on ice
my darling
aghast without
gas are you
where letter blocks don’t
tell me
sew buttons around
yr door no more
When I stop drinking
(oct 24th)
Angel pants the ether
no stop light be drunk
supine moon double shot
the sun into its grave
No laughing matter
(Seoul. October 25, 2006)
Room
and hair
turn
miles away
from the bomb
debt in debt out
sky night sky
my lung
bruised and mosquito bite
I am
in love
I hope
I do not
die
here
